Okay, I'm not doing this because we have so much CR.
I'm doing this because I was in a production of Doctor Horrible.
So yeah, I've thought a lot about the characters -- Well, mostly Moist because that was my role, and Billy because he's interesting and y'know, the lead. ANYWAY. I think you do a really good job with Billy, because he still feels like Doctor Horrible, but different enough that he's believably younger and had less life experiences. You've got the psychology of canon with the differences you need for the age jump.
I can tell there are times you want to go further with his experimentation with technology and/or magic, but I think you've done a good job of reigning it in so far as needed. Just make sure you keep up with that!
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I'm doing this because I was in a production of Doctor Horrible.
So yeah, I've thought a lot about the characters -- Well, mostly Moist because that was my role, and Billy because he's interesting and y'know, the lead. ANYWAY. I think you do a really good job with Billy, because he still feels like Doctor Horrible, but different enough that he's believably younger and had less life experiences. You've got the psychology of canon with the differences you need for the age jump.
I can tell there are times you want to go further with his experimentation with technology and/or magic, but I think you've done a good job of reigning it in so far as needed. Just make sure you keep up with that!