wwistful: (troll10)
Murdoc Marlin Ampora (Orphaner Dualscar) ([personal profile] wwistful) wrote in [community profile] shooc_up 2012-09-10 05:18 pm (UTC)

First off I'm going to say I love your take on Constance and that she makes sense as a human being and I sympathise with her a lot. My only crit would be that she is quite evil in canon and while it's difficult to portray that in an AU I would love to see more of that side of her? At the end of the day it's your portrayal but I feel like you have a bit of room to be crueler with her.


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